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   Julliet skipped through the park, her mother smiled and waved from the distance.
"Be a good girl and stay close to Mummy, I don';t want you getting lost!!" She cried.
"Okay!" Then of went Julliet with a spring in her step, but what she didn't know, was about to change her life.
   I peered through the leaves and scowled at their happiness, I admit it, I was jealous. I have been stuck
here all my life and have recently celebrated my 12th birthday. On my own. I know Julliet's name because she
been here plenty of times, I hear her mother calling her name lots of times.
   My parent had left me in charge of the Underworld so they could go out on a trip 5 years ago, but never
returned, so I have to carry on looking after it and hope that they return. Why I'm here? I got lost on the
way home from the supermarket one day. Whilst I reminisced, I didn't even notice that Julliet had seen me.
"Hello?" She whispered cautiously, "Who are you?" I jumped at the sound of her voice, her face was so close as well.
"M-my name is..." I got distracted by her eyes, so big as beautiful...
"Well?"
"Oh! I'm sorry, my name is Ezra..."
"Well, how do you do Ezra, my name is Julliet." I nodded.
"H-how do you do." I have a problem talking to people, I get all flustered, especially around beautiful people,
like Julliet.
The preview of a story I'm writing. Julliet's name is different to Romeo and Juliet's Juliet. There are a few mistakes, 'don';t' is one, they will be fixed when I go through it soon.
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Shiroi-Kiri's avatar
one question... how come its says he was left there by his parents and then it says he got lost? whut?